My story :D

Hey this is the first bit of my story, I wont be posting any more of it. I just want your oppinions, because I might enter it in a competition.....

So here goes!!! (BTW the first bit is like a blurb thingie)

‘Blood. The cold metallic smell hit Lexi’s nose…’
Ever since Lexi was found aged six lying unharmed in a pool of blood, the mere smell of blood makes Lexi do things. Crazy things, wild things, Insane things.
As Lexi unravels the mystery of her past some dangerous secrets are revealed. Lexi’s parents where dangerous.
They could even be described as killers……..

Who am I? Lexi typed those words. She sighed. Who was she? Lexi changed the font and centered it. Who am I? Lexi asked that question to herself like she had done many times. Lexi pushed the paper explaining the assignment towards her. ‘Cover the following topics: your family, you when you where growing up, your interests and three pictures of you as you grew up.’ Lexi held her hand up and pushed her first finger down I can do my interests she thought. But growing up, no my family, no and three pictures of me! The only pictures I have are of me last summer. Lexi pushed her head into her hands and recalled her past….
Lexi’s earliest memory is of watching a man barge into their house, Lexi didn’t know who he was…….

Lexi sees the man, he stares at her. Then there is screaming. Lexi runs to her mum’s room. She trips, there is darkness. Then light. Blood, a cold metallic pool has been formed around her ankles. More screams. The six year old closes her eyes in fear. A cry, then a spiral of never ending blackness.

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